38: 5 Must-Have Techniques For Creating Unbelievably Productive Copy
1. Get Specific
Nothing can spell
out BORING quicker than bland claims that really say nothing. My
clients make more money! is a perfect example of poor copy that
could use a little life. What happens when you change it to, My
clients increased their sales by 23.5% in the first 30 days! Now
that is kicking! It's specific and exciting.
Be sure that your
claims sound believable, no matter how unbelievable they are. People
are skeptical of too good to be true claims. It's better to tone it
down, and let them be surprised when it exceeds their expectation.
2. Keep It Short
and Sweet
Long paragraphs and
complex sentences look too much like work to read. Yeah, readers get
bored quickly and easily. Chop it up, and break it up. Don't use
paragraphs of more than 7 lines or sentences longer that 18 words.
Find ways to shorten it up, and you'll keep the readers attention.
How many long words
are in your copy? Replace them with short common words to create a
reader-friendly appeal. Let your copy speak to them in the language
they are used to hearing. Well, if your readers don't like to spend
a lot of time reading... it pays to choose your words carefully.
3. Keep it
Active
Eliminate dull
passive phrases. They do little, except bore the heck out of your
readers. Dig them out and replace them highly active words that will
motivate the reader to get up out of his easy chair and DO something.
The call to action
is the most important part of any advertisement. Call, subscribe,
join, order, buy... make them hear the call loud enough that they do
something - NOW.
4. Skip the
Humor
In the right place,
and at the right time, humor is an effective tool. Written sales copy
just isn't it. Ads are short, concise and to the point. Humor tends
to get in the way and distract.
Real life stories
captivate readers. They relate to them. The human interest of these
stories draws the reader into the message, whereas humor distracts
them for the point.
5. Us A Powerful
P.S.
A P.S. can be a
powerful way to emphasize your product, highlight the points of
benefit, or dramatize effects of the purchase. It's the perfect way
to summarize your page.
The P.S. is most
powerful on Web pages. Surfers often read the headlines and skim to
the P.S. where they look to get an idea of what's on the page, and if
it's worth their time to read it. Put some effort into making your
P.S. captivating.
Who is Allyn
Cutts, and why should you care?
Allyn has spent over
24 years helping businesses like yours find new customers and increase
sales to current customers. Allyn is a marketing and sales fanatic,
providing measurable marketing solutions that drive huge results for
small-to mid-size business clients. Allyn works personally with
clients to design and deliver off-line and on-line direct marketing
strategies that focus on metrics and measurable results. You can learn
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